Jeff tripped on a rock, stubbing his toe, and almost dropping Liberty.
“Don’t worry, I’ve got you,” he promised the Bold. “I’m sorry but it’s time for you to go. The fog’s rolled in and that will help you escape Crusher. Please don’t cry, don’t be afraid. Liberty will take you far away. She’s a great ship. My Grandpa and I made her.”
The lump in Jeff’s throat felt bigger than a jawbreaker candy. He should know because he almost swallowed one, once. It was one of the scariest things in his life, almost as scary as Crusher.
Jeff reached the edge of Pine Grove Bay, and gently slipped the driftwood ship into the still water. He took the yellow nylon rope and watched as a gentle breeze pushed against the cloth sails, carrying the good people towards the bigger waters of Gull Lake. He smiled and waved, hoping that it would calm them down, as they begged him not to let go of the rope.
Wherever they ended up, it would be better than here. Better than the everyday meanness from Crusher. That monster loved to torment the Bold. He hated their art, said it was just as ugly as they were, just before he would wreck it. He took their money so they couldn’t buy food and threatened a beating should they tell anyone. Jeff had to make sure that he’d never let the beast see Liberty.
Jeff knew what the word ‘bold’ meant, but he was too afraid to stand up against Crusher, who was a lot bigger than him. He’d felt ashamed and after a while, he’d gone to the King and Queen to plead for help for the Bold.
But the King said that The Crusher was really just a coward and that it was up to Jeff to fight him off. The Queen said that sometimes there are just monsters, and they build something called character.
Jeff didn’t see it that way. He let the rope go and plugged his ears against the cries of the Bold. His eyes blurred with tears as he watched them go. One of the Bold jumped overboard, he was splashing in the water . . . no, drowning!
Jeff ran into the cold water, not worried about getting his clothes soaked. He scooped up the little man who immediately yelled, “What about Princess Carlan? She’ll help! She believes in us!”
“Um, I don’t know—”
“Yes! Princess Carlan! Take us back, Jeff! We don’t want to go!” The Bolds on the ship yelled.
Jeff was frightened but he thought that this might be the right thing to do, so he grabbed the rope and brought Liberty back to shore. Everyone cheered!
Jeff went back to the palace. The Queen wasn’t happy to see him soaking wet. She told him that he’d be late for school and that Miss Carlan would not want such a mess in her classroom.
Jeff quickly changed and set Liberty back on his dresser. He grabbed his backpack while his stomach twisted into knots.
He hurried down the sidewalk, his legs feeling evermore like cooked spaghetti with each step. But Princess Carlan was so nice. She’d always said he was smart, a good artist, and that his stories took her places, whatever that meant. She would help, he had to believe that.
The open doors to Gull Lake Elementary were bigger than a Blue Whale’s mouth, but at least there was no sign of Crusher.
Jeff closed his eyes and took a deep breath. It was time to be brave; it was time to ask his teacher help.
Wonderful story, Mark. Well-conceived and a great message. 🌞
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Thank you, Gwen. 🙂
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As Mr. Rogers said, “Look for the helpers”. Princess Carlan sounds like one. Great allegory:-)
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He was a wise man! Thank you for your encouragement!
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You pulled me right in with this one, Mark. I could feel Jeff’s fear and desperation and his determination. I hope there’s a happy ending beyond the last line of the story. I’m counting on Princess Carlan too. Wonderful writing.
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Thank you, Diana. There are many Jeff’s out there who need a Princess Carlan.
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I know. It’s a sad commentary on human beings that our children are at risk.
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What a well-written story, Mark, with a wonderful message. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Thank you, Lauren.
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Wonderful story!
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Thank you, Dawn.
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That was so good, Mark – and a great deal to learn from this. Toni x
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Thank you, Toni.
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An allegory for school-yard bullying?
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Yes, poor Jeff is being bullied.
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I hope he does get the help from an adult he needs.
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Love stories where I can’t predict the ending. Kudos, Mark.
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Thank you, Jacqui.
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Good story telling. I imagine that Jeff was being bullied at school by “Crusher”
He uses his imagination, and it is rich, to escape on a small ship, with tiny friends.
The king and queen (parents) try to help him overcome his fears by being brave.
At last he acknowledges that he needs to seek help by asking his good and caring teacher. Many life lessons taught in this story.
Well done!
— Mom
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Precisely what I was going for. Thanks for the great feedback!
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Cool👍😊
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This was a fun read with a twist. Glad he is seeking help.
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Me too, Denise. I now that he’ll receive it. 🙂
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Swallowing a jawbreaker must have been painful. Good advice from the Queen that sometimes monsters are there to build character.
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Indeed a painful experience, Frank, on both accounts. I think Jeff will be okay in the end.
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A clever story, Mark, you made your points well.
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Thank you, Robbie.
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This is such a sweet story! I need to read it to Nikolai because I think he’ll see the strong values in it. Thanks so much for sharing Mark!
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I’m so glad it made a connection with you. 🙂 Thank you for the kind words.
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Always!!
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