A shoal in a stream of humdrum
Anchored till there’s naught left of me
All else roams free
Waters lap and return downstream
Winds kiss my nape as they blow past
Grain by grain they erode and scar me
I envy those grains, for they’ll travel far
Those lush green hills will never shade me whole
My brethren, so close, yet unreachable
Subject to the same fate, they suffer together
I’m condemned to a solitary demise
In spite of all, I’ve learned to cope
For when darkness falls, and the skies are clear
Starlight guests shine in my watery mirror
Written for Sue Vincent Weekly Write Photo Challenge
Wowww! Awesome writing!! I really liked this one!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful and so melancholy. It’s so fun to see you making use of Sue’s prompt. Lovely poetry.
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Thanks Diana. This is first time I’ve done one of these challenges, but it was fun. I think I’ll do more. 🙂
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Oh good. You did a wonderful job with this one.
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Thank you:)
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This is beautiful, Mark. You touched upon so many emotions. I love it! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Yvette. I think I might try a few more of these writing prompts.
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Wow, this was visceral and poignant. Nicely done, Mark.
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Thank you, Staci. 🙂
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I really liked your poem, Mark. 🙂
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Thanks, Miriam. 🙂
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You’re welcome, Mark! 🙂
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Well done, Mark.
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Thanks, John.
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Fantastic, Mark! It is such an analogy for much of our human lives and carries a bit of sadness with it. Good job!
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Thanks, Jan. 🙂
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A haunting and sad reflection. The end offered some hope and was beautifully said, “Starlight guests shine in my watery mirror.”
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Thanks, Denise. There is always something to enjoy and be thankful for.
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In the end, we are all of us alone.
Fabulous poem, Mark….and thank you ofr joining the prompt this week.
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Thank you, Sue! 🙂 It was fun.
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🙂
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This is exceptionally, beautiful, Mark. It evokes a great variety of emotions. For me, the human condition, human existence and mortality.
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Thanks, Erica, that is exactly what I was going for.
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Well said, Erica!
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Thanks, Liz.
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You’re welcome, Mark.
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Great job, Mark. I really loved your poem and am thrilled to see you joining in Sue’s marvelous challenges. Sharing to my FB poetry group.
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Thank you so much, Robbie! 🙂
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Thanks for following my blog, Mark. Yours is exceptional. I had a hard time with Sue’s image this week – all I could think of was the silver stuff I am currently trying to shuffle off onto my kids as we move.
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I follow the ones I enjoy and speak to me, Noelle. Thanks for stopping by and your kind words.
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