That road ahead, the warning signs placed by those who’ve gone before,
I sense deception, they cannot be trusted, they guide to the mundane
A life of fun, adventure, my way, anything else is a bore
Ignore their words, their banal minds have grown far too lame
Steer my life away from stoicism, only frivolity satisfies my core
Nothing untoward shall happen to me, it’s all a silly game
Help! Your advice had merit, should have heeded, mired forever I’ll be
Shake your heads, when I open my eyes, that’s what I’ll see
No? Wait! With rope and chain you’re all coming back for me
You rescued me, despite my mockery, set me on a clear road
My family, friends, because of you, I will live each day, gratefully.
I really like how the words and images work together to convey your message. Well done!
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Thank you, Liz!
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Ah, yes! Heeding those warning signs can save us a heap of trouble! Great poetry, Mark, and I love that it ends on a high note!
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Thank you, Jan!
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Thank you sir for commenting on my blog I am new in this field so please help me, I know there is mistakes in my blogs. So please show my mistakes please sir
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I love this, Mark. Its so true that we need the rope and chains sometimes and are lucky to be surrounded by people who offer it.
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I need it often! I also extend it often, as well.
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Good one Mark. That mess in the trees looked like something bad happened there. I loved the ending.
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Thanks John. This was just down the road from my house. There is a sharp corner at this spot. It doesn’t look like iot on the photo, but that ditch is about 7 feet deep.
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Looks like it would put a world of hurt on a suspension system.
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Yes, I agree.
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Fabulous, Mark. I especially love the closing two lines with resonate with the soul and hope.
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Thank you Mae. You are always there to say a kind word! I really appreciate you.
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Aww, thanks, Mark! 🙂
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